Picking up the pace

I found myself slowing down writing-wise over the past month or so. I tried blaming it on my day job, needing a break from writing, needing (but not getting) a vacation, the weather, my house being messy, my dogs… All of these were factors, but at the end of the day my reasons for why I was writing less don’t really matter. What matters is what I do to write more.

I suspect I like herding dogs because at heart we’re the same. We have to do something all the time. However, my need to constantly accomplish things means I can spend an entire weekend cleaning my house, reorganizing my digital photos, scanning bar codes so all my books are tracked on my computer (I use Delicious Library, if you too have a touch of OCD), etc. I can and will find a zillion things to do. Which is great as long as writing is in the list, but not so great when it’s not.

I finally realized two things:

  1. I needed to research a few things for my novel. I knew from the beginning that I had to figure out some key pieces of information, but I decided to plow ahead with the first draft and deal with them later. Partway through the second draft it suddenly became later, but instead of doing research I sulked for a few weeks.
  2. I’d achieved the writing goals I’d set for myself (well, mostly – I’d changed ‘publishing novel #2 in 2013’ to ‘finishing the first draft and starting on the second draft’). This was great, except I hadn’t set new goals. I seemed more interested in sulking about the novel I wasn’t working on than switching to any of my other writing projects.

I was recently listening to a writing podcast in which the authors were talking about how well setting writing goals works for them. One of them mentioned how non-writers will often ask: why are you setting goals? You’re a full-time writer, publishing your own books – why give yourself goals and deadlines? You can do whatever you want!

In my case, do whatever I want turned into things like spending many, many hours on Ancestry.com, which was super fun but I’d get to Sunday evening without having even opened my manuscript. I did clean my office – twice. I sewed polka dot napkins. I read a few books, and even watched an entire movie by myself. (Grosse Pointe Blank, which I love every time I watch it.) I did do some writing – I wrote the first two pages of a new short story, and poked a bit (sulkily) at my novel. But it wasn’t enough.

I needed goals!

So here are my writing goals for 2014. Since these are goals, not rules, I can change them if I need to – but they’ll give me something to shoot for.

  • Novel #2
    • Finish the final draft and get it edited.
    • Come up with a title other than Novel #2.
    • Get a cover design (obviously this requires a title).
    • Publish the novel
  • Finish the first draft of novel #3. (This also includes deciding which novel to work on.)
  • Write 12 short stories.
  • Outline three books in my historical fiction series. (I came up with the series idea a few weeks ago, and I’m super excited about it – but I need to do a LOT of research.)

These are pretty aggressive goals considering I still have a day job, three very energetic dogs, and I haven’t scanned my non-fiction books into Delicious Library. But I’d rather set myself tough goals than easy ones. I like when I’m working super hard on my writing. I like getting to where I can write something useful even if I only have 15 minutes free. Writing is like exercise – once you’ve made it a habit, it’s easier to stick with.

Don’t worry, the dogs won’t get shortchanged.

2014-01-26 Boulder Valley Ranch

Rosie has just learned how to jump on rocks, but doesn’t yet understand that she’s supposed to look at the camera. And yes, she has two leashes while neither of the other two were on leash for this afternoon’s hike.

Behind the Story: A Good and Honorable Thief

“A Good and Honorable Thief” is the third of three short stories in my short story collection A Little Bit of Love.

I really enjoyed the historical research I did for my novel With Perfect Clarity, and when I decided to put out a small short story collection I thought why not set one in the old West? I don’t remember how I came up with the idea of a stagecoach robbery, but once the idea was in my head it was clearly exactly the story I needed.

I quickly learned that I would not have been a fan of traveling by stagecoach. They were cramped, dirty, and it took forever (from a modern-day perspective) to get anywhere. It was unlikely – but not impossible – that Indians might attack, and then of course there were those pesky road agents. Conveniently I started my research right before watching Deadwood, so was pleasantly surprised to see they used the term ‘road agent’ – that was an accurate term, but one that I’d never heard of before.

The stagecoach in this story is taking the Overland Trail. This trail was used by stagecoaches to ferry mail and passengers, as well as by wagon trains of people moving out west. You can still see remnants of this and other wagon trails – in some places the ruts worn by covered wagons are still inches deep, even after all this time.

Wells Fargo acquired several stage lines after the Civil War ended, and became the largest stagecoach company in the west. One of the fun facts I learned while researching Wells Fargo was that they posted “rules” for their passengers.

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The rules included things like:

Forbidden topics of conversation are: stagecoach robberies and Indian uprisings.

So of course I had to have one of my characters chastise another for mentioning Indians…

The robbers in my story were soldiers in the Civil War. After the war ended many men moved out west, either because they no longer had homes or jobs, or simply because the war had been too much for them. This included both honorably discharged soldiers as well as deserters (although presumably some of the latter had headed west before the war ended).

I find it fascinating to read about what life was like in the old west, and I’m sure I’ll write more stories set during that time period.

I traveled on part of the Overland Trail through Colorado and Wyoming last week, and here’s what – or perhaps I should say who – I have to show for it.

2013-12-21 New Little Dog

Behind the story: “Learning to Sail”

“Learning to Sail” is the second of three short stories in my short story collection A Little Bit of Love. The impetus for this story came out of an assignment I did in Dean Wesley Smith’s Character Voice and Setting workshop in Lincoln City, Oregon.

This workshop was the best writing workshop I’ve ever taken. It’s now being offered online, which is a lot cheaper than flying to Portland, renting a car, and staying in a hotel for a week. I might even take it again myself sometime, it was that good.

One of our assignments involved experimenting with paragraph and sentence length. For that assignment I wrote a few hundred words about a guy who was in a relationship with a mermaid. I really liked this concept, and have even thought about turning it into a novel, but I don’t have enough of a story worked out yet. In poking at the idea I caught myself wondering how the guy and the mermaid met in the first place…and voilĂ ! A short story!

The protagonist in this story isn’t the mermaid, but John, a guy on a trip to the Virgin Islands who awakes from a nap to find his tiny rented sailboat has drifted out to sea. Writing from John’s point of view was fun because it allowed me to focus on how he sees Eirene, the mermaid, and I had such fun with that.

Writing about a mermaid brings up some interesting questions. Do mermaids smell like fish? I decided they don’t, since that seemed likely to complicate the romantic part of the story. Close up, what does her body look like where her fishy part meets her human part? If you touched a mermaid’s bottom half, would it feel like running your hand across a fish’s body? And so on.

This is my favorite of the three stories in this short collection. I’m hoping I’ll come up with something more to this story because it would be really fun to use these characters in a novel. Spending some time by the ocean might help give me ideas – as you can see, we are definitely in a dry area…

2013-11-26 Dakota Ridge