Entitled

The title for my first novel, With Perfect Clarity, was there from the start. The main character is Emma, a ghost who believes she remembers her murder down to the last detail … but she actually doesn’t. This concept – and the phrase “with perfect clarity” – was part of the original story idea, so the title was clear from the very beginning.

This is not always the case …

Right now I have three in progress novels, as well as seven short stories that I am polishing and having edited by the wonderful DeAnna Knippling, who is a great editor and a very talented author. Out of these ten stories, only five have their final titles. The rest have working titles like “Pond Girl,” which is the novel I’m focusing on right now. That is the worst out of the bunch, to be sure, but it does serve to illustrate how challenging it can be to come up with a title that fits the story and makes you interested in reading it. It’s especially frustrating when a story is done and you still don’t have a good title!

I’ve been thinking about titles for the past week, partly because I need to finalize a few soon, and partly because my mom recently found a letter I wrote when I was 10 or 11. I was a big fan of the books about Elsa the lioness by Joy Adamson. The first time I read Born Free was in first grade, and I still remember how enthralled I was. Apparently I was enough of a fan to write a letter to the author, although I never actually sent it.

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My mom and I had a good laugh when we discovered this! 🙂

Since I wrote this letter at least 15 years after Adamson published her books about Elsa, my title idea wouldn’t have been very helpful. At least I was cognizant enough to realize my suggestion was probably a little too late. But it was a pretty good title!

I have expanded my list of favorite animals to include dogs, lest you worry. We have been sadly cat-less for a few years, and will remain so until that magical day when we remodel the house and have a decent place for a litter box.

Of course, even when we do get cats they probably won’t go on our daily hikes …

Rosie and Mr. Muddy Paws
Rosie and Mr. Muddy Paws

Tunnel vision

So far this year I’ve only had one short story turn into a novel … I have actually managed to force all the others to stay short! Yay!!!

The disobedient story has no title yet – the codename is ‘Pond Girl,’ which I know sounds ridiculous. Let’s hope I come up with a decent title by the time I’m done… It started as an urban fantasy assignment for a writing workshop I took a few months ago. I tried and tried, but simply could not come up with a single story idea I liked.

One day at work I told a few friends about the assignment and how my mind was a blank, then we started talking about something that was going on in one of the guy’s lives, then someone commented on how it was raining and there was a leak in the ceiling by his desk … and all of a sudden I had my story! It was clear from the beginning that it wasn’t really a short story, but yet another novel. Fortunately it’s been so enjoyable to write that I’ve just accepted that fact.

In chapter two one of the protagonists finds herself in a tunnel. I quickly realized that I didn’t have a good sense of what the tunnel looked like, so I started a Pinterest board of images hoping it would help.

Follow Jamie Ferguson’s board Underground images on Pinterest.

Finding those images was a ton of fun! I finally had to make myself stop looking for more and focus on the story. The pictures helped a ton – my description of the tunnels is much richer. Looking through them also gave me some ideas about where to take the story, which was a big help because I hadn’t worked out the rest of the novel (since it wasn’t supposed to be a novel).

I created a separate Pinterest author account so that I could keep my writing images separate from my personal images. I went back and forth about that, but finally decided that combining my writing-related boards with my boards for vintage sewing patterns (yes, I have more than one such board … as well as a collection of vintage patterns taking up half a closet) might be a little confusing. I’ve started a second board with images related to another scene in the novel since the first board helped so much (and was so fun to make). And while these two boards originated for this book, I will likely use them to help with description in multiple stories.

Extra special thanks to Donna, Rob, and Vignesh for the inspiration!!!

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Dog Birthdays!!!

What better way to return to my writing blog than with a post entirely about dogs???

Jasper turned five (give or take a year) on April 21st. Rosie and I celebrated by taking him on a hike up Mt. Sanitas.

Rosie posed in the foreground even though it wasn't her birthday.
Rosie posed in the foreground even though it wasn’t her birthday.

And here’s the Birthday Boy at the top! He was windblown but happy.

The Birthday Boy!
The Birthday Boy!

Rosie turned three (give or take six months) today, May 2nd. We hiked Dakota Ridge this time.

The Birthday Girl with Mr. Muddy Paws.
The Birthday Girl with Mr. Muddy Paws.

The dogs have come up with a new game that involves pine cones. Jasper will pick up a pine cone and carry it for a while (he gets a happy spring in his step!), then he’ll drop it and want me to throw it like a ball. Rosie occasionally takes this as an opportunity to steal the cone. Here she is, in all her gleevery – she is a gleeful thief!

Gleevery.
Gleevery.

Happy Birthday to Rosie and Jasper!